Wednesday, June 10, 2009

The Seven Broken Pieces

When dreams become greed;
Forcing you to get things you don't need
when admiration leads to envy;
and become you're own worst enemies
until you feel lust!!

and you're spirit turn into dust,
rain keeps you down
life is tiring
and sloth gives you nothing
you're all alone from beginning to end

cause prides just drives to pretend
gluttony kills you're biggest goal
you're hunger for love hide you're beautiful soul
finally you've destroyed all that's left in you

never letting go of you're anger
creating you're biggest danger
sitting all alone in you're old chair
with wrinkled has and graying hair
looking back at the pages
realizing you wanted all you're chances
blinded by this seven broken pieces

2 comments:

  1. nice poem, Aibec! post more of your poems and be an active blogger!

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  2. You really impressed me when you posted this. Your use of English is very good, especially because it is not your mother tongue. You are even able to rhyme words! Excellent effort. You have a natural talent for writing, please keep it up and continue to post your efforts. Again, I am very impressed an happy you are wiling to share your work!

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